So I have a John/Cam gen piece. Seriously, it's not slash.It's roughly 5300 words and should be fairly sound, but I'm pretty typo-tastic lately and would love for someone who's not me to read through it and let me know. It's the last of my pieces for help_pakistan , so it needs to be posted before October, but I don't think it needs much more than a quick read-through. I hope. Any takers?